Do you think my landing page is good?

[Plankton5165]

Is it set to receive a good open rate?

FREE eBook Reveals 12 Secrets Affiliate Marketers Use To Make Up To $20k/Month!

 

[Graybeard]

for reference: How to Add an Anchor Link to Jump to a Specific Part of a Page

replace>Tell us where we can send your FREE eBook!
With: using a media query for mobile --your form is below the fold
<a id="email">Get your FREE eBook!</a>
<a href="#email">[form]</a>

 

[thelegend]

In my opinion the text its not bad but the format its ugly ,for example the image of book its too big ,the format its very ling etc .It was nice to be much small etc

 

[Strickland]

You have to consider your target audience, is a newbie affiliate marketer really going to want that book? With all the other "affiliate Marketing Secrets" books out there, what is it about yours that stands out? Also, you need a clear call to action.
At the moment it looks like you're going to build a solo ads list.

 

[T J Tutor]

All book landing pages require a story, and I recommend some excerpts as well. You need to write a story on that page, make the graphics smaller and more professional looking. In fact, I recommend making the book look real and not cartoonish.

 

[AugustinH]

The title should be shorter because it can confuse the visitors. The book pic is very large and should be smaller. You can write the title besides the picture.

 

[projectzero]

I'd also recommend adding some bullets/fascinations with the most interesting things inside the book.