Seeking Help Roast my funnel so i can learn (Im a Newbie)

[adammrx]

Dear fellow affiliate lovers!

I just started promoting an affiliate offer both on FB and Google Ads with no results so far.
Im promoting a health supplement product called Zeneara, for people with tinnitus. I created an eBook and also put my affiliate link for Zeneara in one of the article inside my ebook. I made 2 different landing pages where im giving it away for free, see the attached files.
I know its close to nothing, but i got 150 clicks without a single sign up for my free eBook. The ads get around 6% CTR on Fb and 3% on Google, which i guess means not too much, since the low number of views so far. I just wanted to make sure if im doing everything right, since i feel i should have gotten a few free sign ups at least already.

Also, when they subscribe and click on the download button, the site will be redirected to the Zeneara product, so there is a chance they see it immediatly after opting in. Should i keep it like that or is it pointless?

Any advices are welcome.

Thank you for reading it,

Wish you all good sales

Adam

 

[adammrx]

Of course, 2 minutes after posting this, i got my first sign up My questions are still valid though

 

[Graybeard]

That is not a complete funnel --that is an a<=>b of a bridge-page [pre-landing filtering to the offer] your free e-book in this case.

That said; The landing pages look OK but the navy-ship blue gray is depressing. Lighten up --these people are interested in relief from their problem. Move the signup box to the right, text to the left, for another version 'C'

I am not sure which color scheme denotes relief and happiness, but the colors look nice.

This was from a study of a site converting various levels, however consider the effect visually

The effect in react (codebase)

Sorry, but that template you are using is very cookie cutter looking TBH. I think people sense that and the trust factor established in not very good --and that is very important in conversion ratios.

Considering you are giving away content/information you want a very high conversion rate on the free part.
Reason: that part may only yield 10% to maybe 30% in a CPA event commission payment for yourself.

 

[adammrx]

Thank you very much for your answer Graybeard!

The reason i chose these colours is because it matches the products sales page colours. Would you recommend me to build another landing page from scratch? Or should i just redesign the opt in form?

How would you recommend me to build more trust with the visitors?

Any other recommendation with my landing page?

Thank you again very much for your help

 

[Graybeard]

That said; The landing pages look OK but the navy-ship blue gray is depressing. Lighten up --these people are interested in relief from their problem. Move the signup box to the right, text to the left, for another version 'C'

Maybe a "D" variate with a lighter background --test the difference.

health supplement product called Zeneara, for people with tinnitus.

Example copy AI:

You could add to this example --but no one pays 14.95 for a e-book that is really not very credible. Supplements that supposedly mitigate or even cure medical conditions are met with a lot of skepticism to start with in the marketplace. The "newly discovered" angle can work but you need so "proven" research that makes some sense. <= as to credibility.

Some things to consider:
Topic in the e-book to highlight they will learn --