Please rate my landing page

[chriscxmpo]

Hello everyone.

I just made a landing page using getResponse. I'm quite a failure with social media advertising and I'm not good with SEO. So try to get sales from an email list. This is my landing page tackling the 'baby care' niche.

Please rate my landing page. Some good and bad points so I can revise.

www. babypages. gr8. com
(please remove the spaces in between)


Cheers,
Chris

 

[ImOK]

Hello everyone.

I just made a landing page using getResponse. I'm quite a failure with social media advertising and I'm not good with SEO. So try to get sales from an email list. This is my landing page tackling the 'baby care' niche.

Please rate my landing page. Some good and bad points so I can revise.

www. babypages. gr8. com
(please remove the spaces in between)


Cheers,
Chris

Hi, Chris.
I like text on your page, it shows that you know problems of your target audience. But, we can't talk about what is bad or good without tests results.
So, I got 2 ideas for tests:
1 - make test with white background
2 - make test with rounded corners at form fields and button

PS. And as far as I know, pictures with people in most cases are good for conversion. Also you can play with the text on the button. For example, you can use "Read now", why not?

 

[VirtualGlobalPhone]

Please rate my landing page. Some good and bad points so I can revise.

www. XXXXXXXXXX com
(please remove the spaces in between)

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[chriscxmpo]

Hi, Chris.
I like text on your page, it shows that you know problems of your target audience. But, we can't talk about what is bad or good without tests results.
So, I got 2 ideas for tests:
1 - make test with white background
2 - make test with rounded corners at form fields and button

PS. And as far as I know, pictures with people in most cases are good for conversion. Also you can play with the text on the button. For example, you can use "Read now", why not?

Thank you for the response. Okay, i will try to revise.

What do you mean pictures with people? As my ebook cover?

 

[ImOK]

Thank you for the response. Okay, i will try to revise.

What do you mean pictures with people? As my ebook cover?

I mean photographs of a child and mother or both parents with a child, who are happy to look after him.
For example, you can add to the picture the cover of your ebook, so that a visitor can see the result, which is said in page text - happy parents, who understand and know how to meet the needs of their child without going insane.

 

[chriscxmpo]

I mean photographs of a child and mother or both parents with a child, who are happy to look after him.
For example, you can add to the picture the cover of your ebook, so that a visitor can see the result, which is said in page text - happy parents, who understand and know how to meet the needs of their child without going insane.

Gotcha there mate. I quite not satisfied with it. Thanks!

 

[altonroot]

Hello everyone.

I just made a landing page using getResponse. I'm quite a failure with social media advertising and I'm not good with SEO. So try to get sales from an email list. This is my landing page tackling the 'baby care' niche.

Please rate my landing page. Some good and bad points so I can revise.

www. babypages. gr8. com
(please remove the spaces in between)


Cheers,
Chris

I have tried multiple times but I think the page has been deleted or moved elsewhere. Please provide the new URL of the page so I can review it.

 

[Magento programmeur]

need some more improvement !! bro maybe they are not fully responsive !

 

[bacls]

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[john stone]

Never stop working and you'll succeed!

 

[thelegend]

Well i check your landing page and it redirected me directli to getresponjse landing pages not to your landing page . You acount expired ?