Tear me apart

[twigg10122]

Hi all, I "finished" a website for a guide/course I made this week and would love some feedback.

For context, I developed a method to profit from bonuses that sportsbooks give out to new customers. It's not a get rich quick deal type deal, it's a "get $2-$6000 and you're done" deal. The guide is priced at $10, as well as another $10 per month for the software, support, and a database of bonus offers to "hunt".

I have two pages I have been using to attempt to drive sales:
easybonushunting.com/index.php/get-started-bonus-hunting/
easybonushunting.com/

So far I have had two signups but no monetary commitments out of ~200 that visited the site. I am thinking I will probably implement an affiliate program as well, do you think any affiliates would even be interested? I think it would be pretty straightforward as I am using Wordpress for the website.

I would greatly appreciate any and all feedback, marketing is not my strength. Additionally if anyone is interested PM me and I will hook you up for free.

 

[T J Tutor]

I have two pages I have been using to attempt to drive sales:
easybonushunting.com/index.php/get-started-bonus-hunting/
easybonushunting.com/

So, you quote the price, but have no buy link. This I think will not be clear to your visitors. I do not see in your copy where it explains a visitor is not just buying a book, but rather buying a guide and a monthly service fee. I think your sales page/signup page needs to be more explicit and demonstrate what they get for signing up and buying not just the guide but also the details of the service itself.

 

[twigg10122]

T J, Thank you for taking the time to check out my site, I sincerely appreciate it.
I will definitely work on describing what it is I am offering better, as well as a buy link.

With the plugins I was using I integrated the "Buy" page with the landing page hoping since the potential customer had to interact less with the site, it would result in more sales. The fact that I have none proves otherwise .

Additionally, I implemented a free 5 day trial for March Madness, this, combined with your suggestions, have resulted in my first signup!
Thanks again,
-Tom